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you made me

You made me a poet,
Whose poems are often found to be filled with your imaginations.
You made me a thinker,
Whose thoughts generally arise by your delusions.

You have changed me, mere from a person to a personality.
A company with you, makes me nowhere in world to any others view.

You made me a criticizer,
Whose critical views are for his own life (without you).
You made me a photographer,
Whose eyes capture only the face of yours.

You have brought a desire,
A desire of you only and rest be in fire.
A walk with you,
Makes me to run on to the heaven and dew.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2012 11:53:00 AM

    Sweet poem! I love the last line.

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki Date: 2/21/2012 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you!
  1. Date: 9/12/2011 6:01:00 AM

    hey Amit nicely penned love story, thanks for your comments..David

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 9:24:00 AM

    enjoyed this ...sarah x

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 7:48:00 PM

    very good poetry

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 8:59:00 AM

    Loved it