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Brick Wall

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Brick Wall

i haven't really noticed till i hit a brick wall that i have been walking around in a daze for so very long i stopped doing what i loved the most been separated from my friends that i cared for wondering now if things will ever be the same thinking back remembering the old days trying to figure out why things turned out the way it did i guess life played its cards and i didn't win as i looked upon this wall in front of me all i kept thinking was I'm just way to weak i cant get passed this, this is the end I'm nothing without the love of my friends i am not the same person that i used to be i lost myself in self-misery then a crazy thought popped in my head i decided to walk around and continue on ahead life may have won the first round but it wont win again i decided that its time for me to go all in because i refuse to walk in a daze again.... (missing what used to be, but i cant change history, maybe one day it will all make sense, but i refuse to not fight and call it an end)

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  1. Date: 9/7/2011 2:36:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing today Fantise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 7:32:00 PM
    enjoyed your work...Welcome to poetry soup. It is raining here in in glorious waves the birds are playing and singing in the showers of blessings. Praise God from whom all blessings flow!!