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The Injured soldier

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The Injured soldier

He fell, fell to the ground
At the gunshot that created such a sound
Nobody took notice of the injured soldier
He was left there lying as the war grew thicker.

He screamed from the pain growing in his shoulder
Nobody realized the pain he would suffer
Trampling feet and screams grew monotonous
The injured soldier tried to ignore the pain that was so venomous.

He made a decision for himself
If he was to survive he'd have to help himself
Nobody was going to come to his aid
Not when each one was looking out for their own head.

He winced in pain as he got to his feet
He wouldn't give up now, not when he still had an army to beat
His shoulder cried out to him in vain
He had already chose to ignore the pain.

He took his rifle up
He adjusted his helmet and refused to give up
He kept fighting till the war was over
Each soldier fighting for their country, their home and their lover.

When the war was done and the battle was won
Every single soldier put down their gun
the injured soldier's shoulder still bleeding
now blinded him with pain and made him lose all feeling.

This time they gave him attention
This time he was treated to friendly affection
He wondered what would have happened if had given up that night
Would they have still won after all that fight?

But he was glad he hadn't for he would have been seen
As a pitiful injured soldier who wasn't keen.

It's the choices we make
And the chances we take
That set us apart
Only when, of course, the decision is made from the heart.

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  1. Date: 9/1/2011 9:55:00 AM
    So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Sahitya. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2011 9:51:00 AM
    A very nice flowing poem here Sahitya, Very thoughtful. God Bless....Taz

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 11:58:00 PM
    A very strong poem..never giving up... decisions.... what a take. Thank you for sharing your poem,..pd.