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The Loss of Wisdom

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The Loss of Wisdom

They mourn wisdom not yet learned It flounces from their grasp, withers Away in the solar wind it burns Itself in the remnants of What once was a beautiful mind, They mourn wisdom not yet learned In this instanced reality Parallel our own treasured find Whisked away on the breeze it yearns Awhile for its past then thinks, as They mourn wisdom not yet learned These creatures of habit turn to Only what they knew, will never know The truth in starlight again nor the Real beauty of the sun's glow They mourn wisdom not yet learned
"Nolite umquam oblivisci" *Took 5th place in the February 2012 International Poetry Soup contest.

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 5:15:00 AM

    Deep... deep. Real deep. Deep and searching- searching for that utter loss- of wisdom. Congratulations Tim. Stay' please' in the stream. Exception OJ

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:13:00 PM

    I enjoyed your poem, congrats on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Refined is the word. Not forgetting this one too quickly.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Tim:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 5:41:00 PM

    Congratulations Tim on your well deserved winnings of recognization. You are a clever and refined writer. Keep up the excellent work. Hugs,

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem and big win in the International contest. A big honor you should savor. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 9:05:00 PM

    Wow!!! outstanding work Tim. Congratulations on winning.

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:01:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 6:36:00 PM

    ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Tim, congrats on your win in the International Poetry Soup contest! I just love the repeated line in your poem. Well done! Love,Kim

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 3:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the International contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 1:18:00 AM

    Congrats Tim on your big win!!!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:40:00 PM

    very interesting and beautifully penned, Tim. You hit on some thought provoking points here on wisdom. Big congrats for your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 1:36:00 PM

    This is a beauty, Tim. Congratulations on your win with this profoundly thought provoking write! Mikki

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win,Tim.

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Tim WELL DONE - A WIN FOR YOU - CONGRATS !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 2:01:00 PM

    Congrats on your superb win,Tim.Well deserved!! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 1:01:00 PM

    Tim, congratulations on your International win..David

  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:48:00 PM

    This is going on my Fav List. Loved it. Well done. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 6:55:00 PM

    There is a form which moves the repeated line down through the verse..can't remember which but you did this very effectively. Congrad's on your fine write getting to round 1. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:47:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Tim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 9:32:00 AM

    I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Tim. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 3:53:00 AM

    A Fourth Place Win Congratulations. CR

  1. Date: 9/2/2011 7:48:00 AM

    Tim, I love te way you describing the wisdom that was once readily available to us but now remains elusive as we age. Very well expressed and I wish you well in the contest. Unfortunately the sonnet was based on bad health news i just received. Thanks for reading it. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 9:28:00 PM

    A verse full of emotion, it's sadness is deeply touching. Tim

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 8:21:00 AM

    Nice poem Tim, I really enjoyed it. Lee

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 12:22:00 AM

    Congratulations, Tim. Take a bow!!

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 6:13:00 PM

    WOw!!!!!!Awesome poem!!!!!congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!!---Lori

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 4:28:00 PM

    Congrats Tim on an excellent win with this magnificent poetry luv.. wonderful words of expression.. thankxx for asking we are all safe and sound..lots of water damage in New Jersey and much flooding... still ..in New York too.. but minimal loss of lives and we are still in Florida on vacation and we were fine..just two days of rain but now pure sunshine and hot luv..

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