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Your Touch

Deep within my chest
My heart 
Pounds
Racing
Seconds 
My hands
Grip 
Back
as you 
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  1. Date: 9/25/2011 8:22:00 PM

    Ashley, felt as though the poem was unfinished until my heart and mind began to complete the deep feeling I had within.A wonderful poem.Crossfox- William

    Plotczyk Avatar Ashley Plotczyk Date: 9/25/2011 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks William, yes at first glance .. it may seem as tho it is unfinished but this is meant so that you have to feel the poem to know the ending.