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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/4/2011 4:10:00 PM

I enjoyed this well worded & expressive write Drake,, i looked you up because i saw your comment on Lizzies neurosis write..! also well put:)

Drake Eszes Date: 12/8/2011 9:05:00 PM

Hey Joe! That's just awesome of you to say. I really appreciate that. :)

elizabeth wesley

Date: 10/12/2011 6:33:00 PM

You always amaze me with your exciting interpretation of such ordinary things like breathing in this one. And your two rhyming words in the same line are so special too. Luv, Lizzy

Sami Helbaoui

Date: 9/18/2011 7:37:00 AM

This was astounding... hope you the best :D

Drake Eszes Date: 9/18/2011 5:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sami! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2011 4:06:00 PM

Enjoyed the expressiveness and emotive feel of this one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Your presence at my work was very encouraging..The cat's in the cradle and the silver spoon little boy blue and the man's in the moon..Sara

Drake Eszes Date: 9/18/2011 5:30:00 PM

HAHA! Yes Sara! :) Thank you!

Mystic Rose

Date: 8/26/2011 9:37:00 AM

Very deep and thought provoking. Love, Vie.

Drake Eszes Date: 8/26/2011 10:01:00 AM

That is much appreciated, Vie! Thank you for passing through here. :)

karl marszalowicz

Date: 8/26/2011 7:56:00 AM

Concise, I like your timing except I want more!

Drake Eszes Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM

LOL if that's the only complaint, I'll take it. :) Thank you so much, Karl!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 9:00:00 AM

Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Drake. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol

Drake Eszes Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM

Thank you much, Carol!

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 8/24/2011 2:43:00 PM

well impressive piece Drake and such a fervent emotional write too.. luv... good luck in the contest.. for luv conquers both life and death in my interpretation ... awesome as always luv.. and so nice to see u back at PS. ... we are in Florida on vacation celebrating our first anniversary ..oh wow..we made it..

Drake Eszes Date: 8/24/2011 3:23:00 PM

Damn right Linda-Marie! Yes! Well said. :) Thank you so much! It is nice to be back here. Awesome for you in FL celebrating! Enjoy that fully!

elizabeth wesley

Date: 8/24/2011 11:53:00 AM

You can take a thought and stretch the meaning with so few words. Love that first line!

Drake Eszes Date: 8/24/2011 1:05:00 PM

Hey Elizabeth! Thank you SO much for that! :) I do what I can...

David Williams

Date: 8/24/2011 10:58:00 AM

hey Drake, i really like this, very strong for the contest, good luck, David

Drake Eszes Date: 8/24/2011 1:04:00 PM

David, that is very kind of you to say. I'm really appreciate that! :) Thank you sir!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/24/2011 10:16:00 AM

Wow Drake, I just love your interpretation for the contest.. So much to take away from this write of yours.. Wishing you all the best for the contest.. :-) Thanks for making a turn on my side of the world!! ~ Wilma

Drake Eszes Date: 8/24/2011 10:41:00 AM

I'm very glad I could, Wilma. It's been awhile. But, it's good to be back. :)

Tony Lane

Date: 8/24/2011 10:06:00 AM

Powerful stuff here. Tony

Drake Eszes Date: 8/24/2011 10:09:00 AM

That means alot Tony. Thank you for that!