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  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:32:00 AM
    this is an amazing story i have just read, David..heartfelt and ever so sincere...going to my fav, it has really hit home for me...

  1. Date: 8/28/2011 1:06:00 AM
    wow, DAvid, this one is just amazing. It is truly the epitome of a 'fragment of life" poem just as we were assigned to do. But it is full of details and feeling to make it very real. congrats on a most well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 9:12:00 PM
    In moments like these we experience what they call the thin line. I must agree David, when we lose a parent the earth shifts from it's axle for a little while. Bless your beautiful heart David. Congrats. On your heart warming poetry.

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 6:47:00 PM
    Beautiful poem and it was so great that you were with her when she died. I'm sure your Dad was there also. Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 12:29:00 PM
    Congratulations David, this is a very touching story. Best Wishes, Glenna

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 4:30:00 AM
    a heartfelt narration of an experience~~~~really deserving~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~smile and cheer up~~junjun*_*

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 11:18:00 PM
    Oh David this write of yours touched me very deeply. Many warm congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 5:05:00 PM
    Congratulations David on your first place win in my contest with his wonderful poem~~

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 4:58:00 PM
    wow, so powerful we all have our death stories each precious..thank you for sharing. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 8:51:00 AM
    I read this yesterday too ....and reflect on the power of this one forever moment at your mum's bedside. Wow. You took such a tender moment and expressed it effectively. Precious write, David. Made me think of the circus at my mother's passing. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 6:41:00 PM
    Wow, David, this leaves me speechless. Very, very, well written from the heart. Thank you for sharing this intimate moment with us.

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 4:51:00 PM
    Many congrats to you, David : )

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 12:14:00 PM
    i really have been so fond of this lately,david!.. sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 12:05:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in this great contest..Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:56:00 AM
    Congrats on your well deserved winner mate, blessings from Paul

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:55:00 AM
    Congrats David on your first place win ...honored to share first with u luv.. excellent poetry...

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:49:00 AM
    Beautiful. Congratulations. Tony

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:18:00 AM
    Well done David. Big congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:17:00 AM
    Beautifully written David. One of the moments that mold our lives. Congratulations on your win.