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(17/08/2011)

Harshing
Mocking
Wishing
Leaving
I recalled you’re harshing by mocking
In my mind I’m wishing you’re leaving

For Dr. Ram' 'Tyburn' contest

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  1. Date: 8/26/2011 8:13:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:32:00 PM

    Congratulations, Dinda. Love that last line!

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:08:00 PM

    Congrats Dinda on your winning poem in Tyburn contest luv...

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 10:14:00 PM

    Nice idea, Dinda. Quite neat, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 6:16:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in my contest,Dinda

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 4:39:00 PM

    Right on target with this piece my dear friend.... i love it!! luv Michael

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 1:39:00 AM

    oooo ! I love it alll....... thanks D.M., once again... mocking says it all,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 11:28:00 PM

    I love that last line. I would be wishing that too, Dinda!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 8:31:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry, Dinda

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 2:29:00 PM

    great write Dinda.. like the way the rhyming words join in the theme and the last two lines are perfection ..good luck in the contest luv..