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Public Toilet

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Public Toilet

rusty 
dusty 
crusty 
musty
needs to be cleaned, rusty, crusty, eew, 
nasty farm smells, dusty, musty loo.


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  1. Date: 9/1/2011 12:39:00 AM

    Always enjoying Jack~Enjoyed reading your words tonight. Thank you for sharing your poem, have your self blessed day,..LINDA

  1. Date: 8/28/2011 11:06:00 AM

    oh Jack we are having a wonderful time of it and the days going by so fast.. the kiddies are so excited to see everything and me too though I have before it is all new again..thankxx luv for enjoying my poetry as I do so yours..luv to u and Sue...

  1. Date: 8/26/2011 7:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:27:00 PM

    Congrats Jack on your winning poem in Tyburn contest luv. one of my favs for sure u know..luv..

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 11:14:00 PM

    jack, this for me was like a top poem. Congrats on your win. oNe of my favorites of the winners.

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 9:31:00 PM

    Haaa! a bit of humor Jack. Quite good, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 6:06:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in my contest,jack

  1. Date: 8/24/2011 8:30:00 AM

    ;It's not paradise.....a necesarry evil....where is the clorox??

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 9:52:00 PM

    thankxx Jack for all your uplifting comments my friend.. means so much while so far away ..oh..luv to u and Sue...

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 1:34:00 PM

    Yeah they should do something about that. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 3:41:00 PM

    Dear Jack, I wish you had been able to put the story of that snake into your tyburn. I'm still laughing. So your mother found it?! Hope you were just kidding about that. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/18/2011 1:14:00 PM

    sounds nasty, but not this poem, enjoyed it, very creative write. thank you for your comment for Harrison's Five and Dime. yes i hope to be back soon, but don't know for sure.

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 11:53:00 AM

    Shudders, crudders, I'll hold me bladders!! Haha! Ok Ewwwww is so right! This one made me smile with the wittiness :) I sure hope to see this in the public winners' list :D

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Got a good chuckle out of this one. So much truth to your words. Thanks for this day brightener and for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 9:25:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Jack. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 8:47:00 AM

    hehe, this made me laugh Jack, I am sure Dr. Ram will love it :) Good luck to you for the contest :) My real name is Wilma and Nolene is my middle name.. Just me being crazy by using it this week :) lfde Wilma

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 12:13:00 AM

    this is a GREAT job with tyburn. one of the best I've seen.

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 11:41:00 PM

    Ha, ha, how hilarious! Those loos do exist too! I hope to never find another one like this one!! Great work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 10:02:00 PM

    Hey Jack, I hope you don't spend a lot of time in them, your description does justice to the nasty place. PS, thanks for your sweet visits, love to read your kind words.

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 9:56:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry, jack

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