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Doubtfull Goodbye

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Doubtfull Goodbye

As you read my mind you sing our song for the last time 
I realize why I fight through all the lies 
And jumped through your impossible hoops
For your voice brings me peace in a world full of war 
And your touch slowly creeps 
On a heart with ice to its core 
You stare into my eyes with love you can no longer hide
And for a moment I forgot this was good bye 
As my heart longs for your kiss
You remind me that my thoughts are not just my own 
And you kiss me like your heart has finally found its home.
The thought of this being the last slips away 
As hope burns through my brain 
You hold me like I'm your dying wish
Reality falls on me like a ton of bricks 
As we pull away, and your words that brought me peace
Sends me to a dark obis 
I love you baby I promise I do 
But I love her too goodbye 

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  1. Date: 8/17/2011 7:17:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Alexis. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 11:14:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words with luv..

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 10:13:00 PM
    Creative and interesting write, Alexis

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 4:33:00 PM
    your poems are a lot like mine :)