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Rain

I love to feel the
wind on my face;
Bask in the warmth
of the sun’s embrace.
As light misty rain
touches my skin
In divine delight 
I go within. . .
The wind becomes 
an internal force.
The sun enters my heart
on its course,
But rain endeavors
to keep me whole
And helps to sustain
my very soul.

© 2011 Connie Marcum Wong

This poem was written to be metaphoric with the 
wind representing internal conflict, the sun having a 
calming effect and the rain quenching spiritual thirst. 
I am sure no one will get it, so I thought I would explain.

I have had recent eye surgery so my time on the computer is limited.

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  1. Date: 9/16/2014 9:14:00 AM
    So nice to find this great one this morn.. I agree and some of the happiest days in my life were sitting on our front porch and watching the rain cascade down upon the fields and trees in our yard. With me sitting there comfortable, dry and enjoying God's gifts. I got the easily seen and the deeper meanings at first reading...

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Lovely poem, I can see you value touch and your sight, enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 9:08:00 AM
    Nice. I like how you use the earthly elements of weather to portray the internal struggle, John.

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Beautifully penned. To prove I got it, I also wrote it. Please read Rejuvenating Rain.

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 11:01:00 PM
    HI, connie, why don't you put up some more of those recent awesome poems of yours I have seen? well, just wanted to thank you for all the reiki you send me and for your always being a good friend. I hope your eyes are not bothering you lately and that you are keeping from getting that cold of your hubbie's. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 6:07:00 AM
    Connie Thank you for sharing this poem. I love your explanation about the rain. I have written several poems about rain. To me rain nurtures, I love making warm soup on a rainy day. I hope you recover quick from your eye surgery. Nice meeting you in PS. Dalila

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 8:10:00 AM
    lovely poem and so poetic in the inferences to nature to describe the legitimate pain and joy of being human. Very well executed Connie. Nice

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 4:35:00 PM
    Hi, Connie. Hope your vision problems are improving. I finally got mine straightened out, after cataract operations and glaucoma. "In divine delight I go within." I like this line. It is what I do also. Beautiful write. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 1:15:00 AM
    Actually the poem is quite understood just the way it is written, Connie! very nice! Thank you for sharing. I hope the eye surgery went well and that you are satisfied with the results. Thank you for your comments on "Foreshadow". Caroline.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:59:00 AM
    connie, coming back here to say hello, and I hope you will post your Egypt poem. you might as well. The judge may not like mine. From the example of hers I saw, she likes serious ones! well, it's nearly 11 p.m and I promised Joe I'd be upstairs at 11. So that was very short playtime I had tonight. I am falling so behind, but he will be driving in a new job in a few days. YAY! finally a decent pay!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 6:05:00 AM
    Dear Connie, a very profound metaphor you have written. Well done!!! Lainie

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 1:47:00 AM
    a blessing through and through... Connie, i have missed much here on the soup i am so glad i bumped into your name... You know i have always been a fan.. Take care, and god bless you,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 12:48:00 PM
    I got the meaning before reading the explanation at the end. You created a visual that I can relate to. I think this poem means that you are open to........umm, I'm not sure what label to use. I find myself now in the same intense state all the time. It is so much bigger than me, and I love it. I find the question, "Who am I?" in my head. And I too am open to the rain....the wind....the reminders that I am 'aware'.....of new possibilities.....my creation of everything surrounding me....

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 1:17:00 AM
    Very good poem and nice use of metaphors ....thanks for the explanation below.Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 11:46:00 PM
    Connie, i am SO happy to see you posting this beautiful poem here. It's been a long while that we have seen your poetry. I miss it! So sorry about your eyes and I hope soon you can resume normal computer activity. I hope many will see this poem!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 10:52:00 PM
    well Connie so good to hear from u my friend and hope your eye surgery is healing nicely.. I had both my eyes operated on three years ago .. lovely poetry still escapes from your creative pen luv.. wonderful words express the parallel meanings.. we have been dealing with much rain and thunder storms for two weeks knocking out power daily.. but I do so luv rain.. and am a sun girl u know.. keep in touch.. prayers to u my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 12:06:00 PM
    It sure is so wonderful to see a post from you here, Connie -- how I hope and pray that you are recovering well from surgery-- this is such a moving and heartfelt poem; I really love the metaphors you used here, very fitting and beautiful; thank you for this very inspiring poem...

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 10:27:00 AM
    A lovely piece Connie. Wish u a quick recovery

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 10:22:00 AM
    I believe more people will get it than you think Connie. Thanks for sharing. Steve

  1. Date: 8/16/2011 5:22:00 AM
    Actually, I can see the metaphoric value in this poem quite clearl, Connie, especially when yous ay, "I go within." I hope the eye survery is successful and am sending prayers for God's blessings your way. It's great to see you posting again, dear. Love, Carolyn