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Christ's Sacrifice

Unclothed
Anguished
Bloodshed
Outstretched
Was totally unclothed, anguished soul
Hands sides thorned head bloodshed, outstretched whole


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  1. Date: 9/27/2011 6:37:00 PM

    Hi Sara: Quite a powerful poem of faith...fantastic. It reminds me of the movie "The Passion". Thanks (again) for taking the time 2 read and comment on my poem. PEACE!!!

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 9:18:00 AM

    I wonder how many folks really give thought to that which Jesus endured for each of us, wonderful write - tremendous food for thought, thank you

  1. Date: 8/17/2011 5:03:00 PM

    Powerful and moving write, my friend.

  1. Date: 8/15/2011 9:56:00 AM

    Yes indeed my friend. All for us. And look at how much appreciation is shown. A good write to remind us what He did for us. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 5:52:00 PM

    Ps. Smile, *^_#* “Thanks for Stopping By &, Have A Blessed & Beautiful Evening, My Dear!” *

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 5:48:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “You Know, I Stood Within Heaven Inside of `His Majesties Beautiful Loving Arms,` Nearly Two-Thousand Years After This Moment My Dear Precious & Priceless Sara! *^_^* And His Glory Showed Myself His Indiscribable Love As, Very Few In This World Have EVER Known *^_^* Sooo, I Can Surely Attest That, `The King of The Universe,` Is Alive, Flowing With Beautiful Love & Doing, Absolutely & Perfectly, Well! *^_^* Great Poe.” === My Love to You Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 5:26:00 PM

    Moving piece, Sara - and an interesting form I've never tried

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 9:38:00 AM

    A very descriptive write of what did happen.

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 6:29:00 PM

    Awesome descriptive write of pain..and thirty lashes with the cruel Roman Throng, excellent tribute to Our Lord and Savior the Christ....with love...old Jack

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 3:58:00 PM

    a enduring hymn of devotion and praise, sara.. so apt and beautoful for this weekend and thereafter..:) hugggs, nette

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 1:33:00 PM

    Devotional write on the suffering of our lord. Sara,thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 12:54:00 PM

    a vivid portrait of HIS agony and death Sara .. outstanding emotion in every line my friend.. we all should recall this sacrifice every day in our lives..luv..

  1. Date: 8/13/2011 7:31:00 AM

    Thank you for your wishes, jag

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 10:08:00 PM

    hmmm, I will have to check out the rules on this form. I think I see a pattern from how you did yours. Nice theme, Sara.

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 9:22:00 PM

    Successfully tried Tyburn, Sara. what a a nice devotion,

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 8:49:00 PM

    I love the subject matter! Good good write!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 8:10:00 PM

    I really like this one. im not familiar w/the form but i like how it turned out - very descriptive! btw, did someone suggest you write in this form?

  1. Date: 8/12/2011 7:53:00 PM

    This is great Sara, a wonderful tribute......luv...chiquita