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Cause and affect

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Below is the poem entitled Cause and affect which was written by poet Harley Green. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cause and affect

why do they let me bleed
help is what I need
i'm trapped in this darkness
I cut myself and feel the sharpness
why dont I feel loved
why dont I push when i'm shoved
why am I shy
i'm alone when I cry
why do I not fear suicide
i'm sad and alone on the inside
i'm trapped in the quick sand
no one will lend a hand
you cant sink my boat
it was never afloat
why do they try to hurt me
i'm already alone and tiny as a flea
why dont I trust any adult
I dont know but it involves assault

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  1. Date: 8/8/2011 10:33:00 AM
    excellent write, deep thoughts, good poetry. i would edit it to remove the spelling mistakes.

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    Date: 8/8/2011 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    what did i spell wrong? and how do u spell them right?