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Tomorrow

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Tomorrow

Maybe tomorrow
I'll tell you how I feel
Let you come deep inside
Show you a love that's real

Maybe then I'll get up the nerve
to ask you for a dance
See if we can make it work
Give our love a chance

Tomorrow
I'll try something different
open up to you
Finally say, I'm the one you want
The one that you should choose

But for now
I'll just pray
tomorrow comes our way
Hopefully I'll find courage inside
Save up for it today

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  1. Date: 8/7/2011 11:05:00 AM
    I really liked this poem, great rhythm and rhyme. It was very well written.

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    Date: 8/7/2011 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Didn't realize my comment went through, so I reloaded the page and saw my two prior comments which seemed to fail up.. hence the three.
  1. Date: 8/7/2011 11:03:00 AM
    I really like this poem! It had great rhythm and rhyme. Very well written.

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 11:01:00 AM
    I really like this poem! It had good rhythm. It was well written and rhymed.

    LaRocca Avatar Kimberly LaRocca
    Date: 8/7/2011 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 8/7/2011 12:09:00 AM
    Hello Kimberly! the thought of waiting is just prolonging.. don't waste a minute..lol.. let him know as soon as possible.. I am the kind of gal who can't wait another day. Kidding.... tomorrow can be an infinity word, meaning take your time... all good things will come about. especially love. enjoyed the poem,..p.d

    LaRocca Avatar Kimberly LaRocca
    Date: 8/7/2011 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I totally agree DP. Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 8/6/2011 11:23:00 AM
    Hmmmm..I like it): Good work Kimberly...Thanks for sharing and I hope it (he) works for you if its meant to be it will. I'll pray for you 2:) Terrell Martin

    LaRocca Avatar Kimberly LaRocca
    Date: 8/7/2011 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! I'm actually married. This was just one of my rambling thoughts. Thanks for the prayer anyway. Can never have enough of those.
  1. Date: 8/6/2011 11:01:00 AM
    a `lovely poem of love, i like this a lot, so well written.

    LaRocca Avatar Kimberly LaRocca
    Date: 8/7/2011 12:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the visit