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The suns of Aron

The twin suns of Aron, one yellow, one red
blaze in the twilight as day seeks its bed.
Stained ruby and gold are the towers of Dawn
as they rise to the heavens on the plains of Layon.
I watch from a room of dizzying height
as the walls all around flash silver and white.
The small golden ball is the first one to flee
sinking slowly beyond a lavender sea.
The sky that is usually a deep forest green
bleeds slowly into a strange reddish sheen.
While the red sun sinks slowly out of my sight
it leaves in the sky a slight glowing light.


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  1. Date: 8/23/2011 1:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Not Just Any Sunset" contest Linda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 11:57:00 AM

    Congrats Linda on your super wonderful win in the contest with this excellent expressive poetry luv..

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 4:17:00 AM

    I have a lovely scene in my head now Linda. What a fine poem indeed, congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 5:03:00 PM

    very nicely put together for this win Linda. Congratulations to you

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 3:58:00 PM

    hey Linda congrats on your win Dave

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 3:52:00 PM

    Linda: Congratulations on your win in the Not Just Any Sunset...contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. Very challenging! Caryl Ramsdale

  1. Date: 8/6/2011 6:52:00 AM

    very visual i like this good poetry