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my ice queen

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my ice queen

 we started off like a fairytale,everything too good to be true
the sun rose with its glory,the birds chirped like never before
the warm summer breeze scented a musky fragrance
music became alive and merrier ,all words i could relate to
  it was ecstatic,he held me and we travelled through the doors of reality
a wonderland,where the trees showed colors of love,the sky was spotless blue
it was magic,trance,illusion stronger than any drug
a trippy little world only for me and you
a hard blow to my head brought me to my senses,i realized it was just a fantasy
with closed eyes,that world felt amazing
disappointed and hurt, that dream felt so real, but it still wasnt true

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  1. Date: 7/29/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Your poetry is very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Mary. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol