Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

You Never Knew Me

Michelle McDermin Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled You Never Knew Me which was written by poet Michelle McDermin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Michelle McDermin

Best Michelle Mcdermin Poems

+ Fav Poet

You Never Knew Me

You never knew me 
for who I really was
you saw me at my weak point
You never knew 
how strong I was
in my loves and hates
You never saw my talent
they're coming back stronger now
You never saw my true outer beauty
My spirit was dying
the effort was dying
living a lie
and dying on the inside


This will be my second make over
but only this time it will be complete
my appearance
my friends
my god
my likes and dislikes
my inner most power
and the fight I have
to stand up for what I believe in
No one's gonna tear me down this time

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 7/28/2011 3:05:00 PM
    Wonderful creative writing today Corinne. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 6:55:00 AM
    I'm with you on this

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 10:59:00 PM
    right on, then... best wishes to the subject!