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Pool

Within the depths
Of my final breath
I sink from the surface
I have nothing left
I’m suffocating under the silent tide
I try but no air can get inside

Amongst the pain
Of the water’s force
I collapse from the pressure
With no remorse
I suffocated under the silent tide
Your laughing face, as I died





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  1. Date: 8/29/2011 9:46:00 PM

    Great, great - as usual! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 2:03:00 PM

    This is awesome. Very descriptive poem and a very tangible illustration of anguish.

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 12:17:00 AM

    Dude, I know marriage is rough, but.............haha. sorry :) haha. sorry man, sorry. I couldn't resist.