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Visable

A look in the mirror, there one can see
They are not invisible, not a piece a debris
A look in the mirror, is all it takes
You are a person as real as those aches

The aches one can feel, when another diminishes you
The aches you can not see, when someone truly hurts you
You are you, I am me, we are both visible
Now let them see

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  1. Date: 7/24/2011 9:12:00 PM

    Superb! The writing is very clean & the flow is gentle.

  1. Date: 7/23/2011 10:03:00 PM

    I really enjoyed your work, vert well put together