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You're still not here

You’re still not here
after all the years I had stand
You’re still not here,
this loneliness that I do fear.
My footsteps faded on the white sand
whilst the shore wash me away and
you’re still not here.

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  1. Date: 12/1/2011 10:00:00 PM

    Well written......congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:59:00 PM

    A let down indeed Celine. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:03:00 PM

    Hauntingly beautiful. Congratulations on your placing!

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 9:10:00 AM

    Sounds like a real let down. congratulations Celine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 8:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Celine

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 6:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Celine. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 1:36:00 PM

    A touching write here ...very nice.Congrats Celine on your win.

  1. Date: 8/1/2011 11:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Celine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 8:53:00 PM

    Congratuylations on your win Celine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 8:28:00 PM

    Celine, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 6:33:00 PM

    CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement here in Dr. Ram's RONDELET contest. . .~~~*-*junjun

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 5:12:00 PM

    Congrats Celine on a fantastic win in the contest with these exciting words luv..

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 3:54:00 PM

    A nice little tragic one, Celine. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 2:29:00 PM

    A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 2:10:00 PM

    My congratulations on this win in my contest, Celine

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 1:28:00 PM

    Thanks for the entry, celine

  1. Date: 7/23/2011 9:34:00 PM

    sweet! Sad...made me feel the pain..well done. BG

  1. Date: 7/23/2011 12:46:00 PM

    Excellent! Love it! - Best to you, Karen