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Tunnel Vision

Headlights on? Tunnel ahead
Keep claustrophobia at bay
"Only way to get there", he said
"You know I don't like this", I said
Brake lights flashing to my dismay
Panic arises, heart beats wild
Taking deep breath and start to pray
His punishment won't be mild



Written by: Shani Fassbender
for the Contest:  "Hutain This One!"

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  1. Date: 8/4/2011 8:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 1:33:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Shani

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 11:42:00 AM

    Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/4/2011 9:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Shani. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:45:00 PM

    oooh, very interesting way you took it. Yes, a tunnel very well can fit that picture. Congratulations, Shani!

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 8:12:00 PM

    LOL, I'm getting cataracts! Sometimes I swear that's what I see when I'm driving! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 5:37:00 PM

    congrats Shani on exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing lines luv...kudos to u..

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 3:28:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

  1. Date: 7/29/2011 1:21:00 PM

    Wow, it made my heart beat faster just reading this one! Lovely piece, Shani

  1. Date: 7/27/2011 12:02:00 PM

    thank you for joining shani... a searing piece which i will relish and decide on come judging time..:) huggs, nette