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Dawn Of Time

As I lay there across the bed
I feel his touch caressing  me 
With feather like fingers
He traces's  the length 
     Of my spine
Chills run through me
Like the dawn of time

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  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:53:00 PM

    looked through your oldies and found this one. It's a GEM.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 4/6/2013 8:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Chills ran through me too... reading this excellent piece with that killer final line! BRAVO Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 9:48:00 PM

    This is good. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 7/30/2012 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara ;}
  1. Date: 4/19/2012 11:28:00 AM

    Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Deb. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/26/2011 6:52:00 AM

    i'll toast to this subtle sense of sensuality, debbie..:) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 7/22/2011 3:01:00 AM

    this is great

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan Date: 7/26/2011 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you ;}