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The space between us is becoming tense

I smile to reassure you

The waiter’s hands are clenched

With impatience, he looks at you

You look at me I want to flee

It’s obvious there won’t be a second date

Please believe it was a mistake

I forgot my wallet on our first date

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Humor Me" contest Maina. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Maina.. congratulations with your poem... always~ :-) PD

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:26:00 AM

    you sure did a good job portraying that situation!!! Congrats on your win with this amusing poem, maina.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Maina, don't forget it next time lol xx

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Been there and it isn't funny LOL is it?Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:10:00 AM

    awwwww. Loved the read Maina....Seren

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:59:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win, Maina! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:31:00 PM

    congrats on your 4th place win in the contest Maina

  1. Date: 8/14/2011 6:31:00 AM

    Great write Maina, very witty... ....smiles...chiquita

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 9:21:00 AM

    Maina, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 7:30:00 AM

    Wow, Thank you all for reading and commenting on my poem you are an encouragement. I will continue posting more and more.

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 7:18:00 AM

    hehe, shame hopefully you were forgiven :) Congratulations on your win Maina :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 6:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Maina. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2011 6:22:00 AM

    Congrats Maina on your fantastic win with this dynamic delight in poetry .. enjoy luv..