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Love poem

We were once so close
we were once one.
I new everything about you,
you knew everthing about me.
I gave you the chance
you threw it in my face.
I gave you an inch
You took a mile.
You always said you cared for me
I always made you my priority.
I was a mere option
You aremy whole life.
I gave my life to you,
yougve me a shadow of you.
This love will never be the same.
I don't think we should wait until the end.
I'm bracing myself for the heartbreak,
your holding it so I can live with the suspense.

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  1. Date: 7/19/2011 7:57:00 AM
    So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today of the seasoned poets and the new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Veronica. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

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    Date: 7/21/2011 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the comment, :) my poetry is the only things I have and hearing positive feedback makes me entirely happy