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I Was at a Park at Night

I was at a park at night
And I thought of you
As the sky grew darker and darker
And the air grew colder and colder
Because those are the only two adjectives
I could think of to describe your heart 
Which was weighing heavy on my mind
During my view of the park at night

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  1. Date: 7/21/2011 11:32:00 AM

    You seem to have been "hurt" by someone and that comes through in this poem. Let me know what you think of my recent efforts

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 11:52:00 AM

    Very nice write.