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Raindrops Fall

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Raindrops Fall

Raindrops now escape the clouds
and downwards they do fly.
Earthbound now their journey starts,
set free from blackened sky.

Let loose they dance upon the ground
and skip as if at play,
a melody they seem to hum,
music, natures way.

Into rivers, brooks and streams
each raindrop heads like home,
and over waterfalls they rush,
into oceans seek to roam.

They call to clouds for brethren rain
to fall and learn to fly,
to start a journey homeward bound,
and escape their blackened sky.


For PD's contest 'Best rain poem'
8th place

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  1. Date: 9/17/2011 9:02:00 PM

    This must have won! It is just perfect meter and rhyme with wonderful visions to see.

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 8:55:00 AM

    love the expression of freedom, implied, beautiful writing steve from sheffield uk

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 11:32:00 AM

    Emma congratulations on winning with this beauty ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 10:21:00 AM

    Lovely Quartain, Emma. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 9:47:00 AM

    Congratulations Emma on your win in the contest of P.D. "Rain". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 8:24:00 AM

    My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., Emma

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 7:32:00 AM

    Congrats Emma with this great piece of poetry...always Michael

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 7:27:00 AM

    Congrats Emma on another wonderful win with this expressive poetry luv..enjoy..

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 5:03:00 AM

    I see you have won in another contest here with this lovely poem about "natures way". I enjoyed it Emma and congratulations to you. I shall enter you into my favs. Glad I found you.

  1. Date: 7/17/2011 2:31:00 AM

    Emma, Congratulations on your great Rain entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem about my favorite refreshing gift of life. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 4:48:00 PM

    You make it sound like the raindrops are having a great adventure! I am 101 years old and this is the first time I have ever done anything with my poetry. Your comments were greatly appreciated, especially since they were my first from anyone besides family. Frank

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 7:27:00 AM

    WoW! Love this. Going into my faves. Beautiful imagery and nice flow. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 6:22:00 AM

    Very nice, Im sure PD will love this image full write....always Michael

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 6:14:00 AM

    hey Emma, love this good luck in the contest, many thanks for your comments. David