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Dirty

I watch you pull at the sheets, 
tugging my hair and in a pattern of expectations
-you always meet.
Nails in my skin, digging deep. 
Welts building up, and sounds break our heavy silence,
I knew what you wanted from what I could see.
Sin clouds our pure, clean minds,
I look up at your hand intertwined in mine.
Hell yeah, this is it.. out of breath I gasp in air, 
you're loving this, pulling at my hair.
To get a little dirty is never a bad thing,
when you're searching to please.

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  1. Date: 7/14/2011 10:00:00 PM

    I hate this. It's not bad, good imagery and sensory language, but I hate it. You wrote it very well! Great job =) I just hate it. You're a healer, and I hate that.

    Huddleston Avatar Olivia Huddleston Date: 7/16/2011 4:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you(:
    Huddleston Avatar Olivia Huddleston Date: 7/15/2011 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You actually hate it? :/ And what do you mean a healer?
  1. Date: 7/14/2011 8:08:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. a true gem ...

    Huddleston Avatar Olivia Huddleston Date: 7/16/2011 4:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you(: