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NotBroken

introduction: We have two eyes, two ears, two hands, two feet but one soul.
We came to this world for many purposes, for many tests. And among all the tests, we are
here to find our perfect companion to make our lives actually complete and start a new
expedition. Two tracks merged into one that can never be separated. And to make the ground
not get cracked, we need to be that strong enough…no matter how many earthquake drives by.



When the glowing sun will shine,
I’ll start my quest to seek my fate
The moment when you will be mine,
You will know why you’re so great

Now, I’ve tried so hard to make you realize
You really don’t have to be afraid,
Of all the things you feel alive
Your soul is as elegant as a pure jade

When time comes we all have to go,
Because life never stays all frozen
And when the night falls upon your door,
I need you to be Notbroken.

When I’m gone, you be strong
I need you to wipe your tears and believe,
No matter how far away, I’m always here with you
As you’re my truth, my fate, my everything... 

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 10:00:00 AM

    Aqeb Be,... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 2:59:00 PM

    Yes,two souls joining as one.

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 12:15:00 AM

    This is really sweet, I really like it. Unfortunately my boyfriend is a sociopath, so one day he asked me what I would do if he had cancer. I said I would drop dead. He contently says, "I would want you to be in Heaven with me." I just smiled at that. Not a normal response, most people would want the other to live a long and happy life.. oh well. Enjoyed. Dana'lynn

    Ibn Minar Avatar Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 9:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That is...no comment lol! well I'm glad this piece made you feel different, something more than somewhat dreary and usual ;)
  1. Date: 7/30/2011 9:14:00 PM

    you have a long way to go. not in books but in pain. when you've seen both sides of the coin only then you know it's real. you seek fame and fortune and we see you as a gold digger. but finding one with real love is what we'd rather discover.

    Ibn Minar Avatar Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes very nice! very motivating truth in your words. you blew us all away...we get it.
  1. Date: 7/13/2011 5:32:00 AM

    Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Aqeb. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

    Ibn Minar Avatar Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 8/2/2011 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I highly value your appreciation, thanks a lot.
  1. Date: 7/12/2011 7:21:00 PM

    I like reading this imagining that the speaker is God and the spoken to is any of us. I like it very much! Thanks for the read.

    Ibn Minar Avatar Aqeb Be-Nazir Ibn Minar Date: 7/30/2011 7:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well, the approach of the speaker is "you" and the spoken to is "your soulmate" ;) but thank you for commenting!