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Soup To Go

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Soup To Go

~Soup To Go~

This summer~ all I want is a bowl of soup 
A secret flavor that combines every veggie group 

                   
An outcast taste of ancient granola herbs
All kinds of extracts that create different verbs

I will leave the table only to dance out in the rain
Round and round in wonder catering out my sweet refrain

I will visit mother and tell her I forgot her recipe
Brag about my soup and how I used and stole her ecstasy

Paint about the life she gives the grounded trees
Think about the sugar that makes me surrender to her sweet debris

I will order me a special~ with the right poetry breeze
Exchange my cookie dough with mothers pollen seeds

Hide behind her oak tree and listen to her endlessly
I can even cook myself a picture making nature my enemy

Close my eyes and smell the mist of self control
Hold on to my emotion and take a sip of my soup bowl

Add extra salt and pepper to every line I manipulate
Swirl my spoon around and smile at every thing I hate

Come sit down with me and collaborate
Lets cabbage out on mothers nature's plate

Wakening up to her blossoming sauce that drips with a certain flow
Driving by her White castle, and stare at another soup to go

Order me; a soup of all the things I see
Order me; a soup  made out of mystery
Order me; a soup out of the things I wanna be
Order me; a soup made out of the sadness found inside of me

Order me; a coffee to go with my poetry soup
Type me a funny comment that will add a smile to my food group:-)

by;p.d.

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  1. Date: 9/13/2014 9:48:00 AM
    It is interesting reading then and now. It wasn't Tag then but it is now. Tag you're it.

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Hi, my ever dearest sis! I'm so happy to read again this splendid couplet of yours! I feel that I'm having an excellent snack/meal 2day ;)). Again, thank you so much for sharing & for your sweet messages this morning. I'm so sorry if I come only now. I accidentally slept too much maybe because I got tired :))) When I arrived home yest. p.m, I slept up to midnight. After midnight meal I slept again up to 11.30am. this Sun. :)). Hope you're doing fine. Have a blessed Sunday! Hugs! love m4ever, Leo

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Soups going cold

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Order me to do whatever you like lol, bet that put a smile on your face

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    Date: 5/9/2013 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm game soup
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Hi, my dearest sis & most favorite poet! Stopping by here to savour this marvelous write of yours before continuing my school assign. and finally heading out to bed 2night. Hmmmn.. I extremely love it from beginning to end. My fav! Two thumbs up for the very unique and lofty style of this couplet of yours ! Thank you so much for sharing and for everything! Good morning there and good night here! Here's my extended Valentines greetings of love, big hugs and kisses! love always and 4evr, Leo

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Soup to go,, wow when i read poetry from you like this,, i sometimes wonder, why i bother, how can one emulate wondrous writing such as this,, you have something very special Linda,a mind i would love to penatrate if only to learn your imagery....

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 1:32:00 AM
    Hi Pd how about a garabaldi to go with coffee nad some french stick for the soup, love this write brilliant, a bowl full of your words fro me is just the way to start the day, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:50:00 PM
    Returning to one you did on soup FAMILY. I am your poetry sister, PD!!! REgarding what you said of my poem, I hope you are close to your sisters also, aren't you?

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:20:00 AM
    if you like the taste of this soup you need higher standers of ingredients

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 2:50:00 PM
    *From contest

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 2:49:00 PM
    P.D., please give me a heads up if you want me to remove my entry into your contest, because it has already been entered into a contest in the past. Thanks!

  1. Date: 7/19/2011 7:54:00 AM
    Wow!!! You did a very great job here! I love the poem, the rhyme and the meaning behind it. :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2011 4:49:00 AM
    thankxx PD my BFF for both big wins for the "Sweetheart".. u make my days brighter... so appreciate the luv... now got your comment about collab with u... today I have two doc appts...so later today would be OK for u? I have not read the rules as yet but know I want to participate especially if collab with u luv...just let me know details and I will hop to it .... thankxxx ..your BFF for life...for beyond...

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 11:42:00 AM
    Good job as usual, P.D.! Enjoyed reading you today. Yes, we all need a bowl of soup ever so often! lol Thanks for the comment. Miss soup too... Soup mail. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 12:49:00 AM
    soup is good there is no doubt but only if followed by a grill cheese melt mmmmm grilled cheese...

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 8:33:00 PM
    boy, PD, I sure never knew you had this new one up until I looked at the hot list just now. Haven't checked that thing in so long. This is really a cute idea. Let me see: Order me some bean soup. It's ok, nobody is around me here in this computer room. hahaha. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 6:59:00 AM
    Wow! Great imagery and filled with odorous flavor. Could actually smell the steaming herbs. Excellent.

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 10:01:00 AM
    I really liked this. Life itself is like a bowl of soup filled with things that are good for you and some things that we dont like very much. Really great and imaginative write. Lovedit. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 10:31:00 AM
    I just sat down to eat a bowl of soup my Cousin Cindy brought over... yours was better! Thanks for the comment on my poetry.

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 9:31:00 AM
    Where u be..dear PD... my BFF ...the verey best... miss u so..more than u know... life is sweet.. your poems a treat... enjoy your day... my beach play..is A OK..oh ..your BFF..

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