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harry horsman

Date: 12/11/2012 7:37:00 AM

still getting i see comments on this your first on soup, first time for me to see this, wow it is so good, i really like this......

chipepo lwele

Date: 11/12/2012 5:42:00 AM

lovely lyric.

chipepo lwele

Date: 10/11/2012 2:30:00 AM

nathan this poem rekindles my love for my wife.marvellous write.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 5/10/2012 7:59:00 AM

Awesome poem, so romantic! wonderful ending :) p.s. your avatar cracks me up!

Date: 5/3/2012 10:42:00 AM

I like this one Nathan. Why could I not find a man like you? "Nice" for my one was an odd choice of word. Is that you in the picture? Jean

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/2/2011 9:47:00 AM

A great discription of a great gal is what i say Nathan, Although i found it a little...well short..? ha ha no just kidding:) a pleasure to read...!

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/28/2011 6:28:00 AM

This is lovely romantic lyric, lucky lucky Irma ( but don't her she'd got Jack the Ripper!) X Lizzie

Lizzie Treetop Date: 11/28/2011 7:47:00 PM

Now I know your secret the gig is up! No wonder the lovely beautiful lady is ding bats! Still laughing Lizzie!

John Rhinem

Date: 11/20/2011 3:29:00 PM

Smile, thanks for the heads up about Jeffry and, I'll definitely rush right over * Love always, John!:) *

Florence McMillian

Date: 10/27/2011 10:16:00 PM

How beautiful to see such love come from a man - my faith has been restored - Thanks!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2011 6:56:00 PM

why is your p o e m on the first page again you've got to be kidding thank you... had a nice and wonderful day.. god bless your soul.. yeah,, who's got the block head r I g h t now.. sleep tight*p.d

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jakitz.

frank herrera

Date: 10/13/2011 9:17:00 AM

A BEAUTIFUL GEM! Loved every line. By the way--I have a sister named Irma. (deceased)

Ed Ebbs

Date: 10/11/2011 12:33:00 AM

Congrats on your featured poem! Wow, may you alway stay in the mood with your face towards the sun and the wind at your back. Good Job

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 10/9/2011 10:36:00 PM

congrats jakitz ..on featured poem this week on PS... a wonderful write to share luv.. so who is she really luv????

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2011 4:05:00 AM

who is she,... lol...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2011 12:30:00 AM

This is a very nice love poem. Is it dedicated to the irma of soup? Glad I found it down here to read tonight!

Chris D. Aechtner

Date: 9/27/2011 12:02:00 PM

Heya, I saw your nice comment in my blog. That blog was all about sarcasm. You can call me all sorts of names if that is wot jaks you off.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2011 2:45:00 AM

I can actually play a tune to this,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2011 11:03:00 PM

I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Jakitz. Love, Carol

frank herrera

Date: 8/11/2011 10:50:00 PM

I really enjoyed this wonderful Poetry--Beautifully written with great rhythm and flow! Thanks for dropping by my Poem. You have a Unique name--Where you from?

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2011 2:44:00 AM

lol.... I never heard of a town called Calli in Texas.

Nathan A. Date: 8/12/2011 12:01:00 AM

California suburbs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2011 6:19:00 PM

enjoyed these expressions very thoughtful, jakitz

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 7/11/2011 4:39:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv.. great emotions..

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/13/2011 11:39:00 AM

Yeah welcome to the soup

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 4:09:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jakitz. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 12:38:00 AM

the ending is the best, I am sure that ending is reassuring for your S.A.~ ...meaning that one person can make all old hippy dud's seem like a mosaic era ago. I can go on about this poem. But, 4 some reason I feel as if I have falling in love with a beat that was created to this poem. I don't know? Maybe I can combine a piano tune to this. Lucky S.A.... take care,.. always,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/11/2011 12:39:00 AM

sun lit floor... yes,,, burn baby burn... and welcome....