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Then Hue Lure My Being

Fill my craving with your zesty rind
In the mist of my longing, come splashing
Ingest my inn with your piquant smiles

Will you rain like dew for my pipe is parched?
Drizzle my windows with decorative light and
Melt your pot in that multihued bend

Be my condiment in this insipid snack
But preserve your liquiscent state
No! Not in the canister

Who says this dye belongs to Freud?
After you entice my eyes and tongue.
Then citrus filled my air now back to stanza one.

Orange
For Nette Onclaud’s Color My Word
Adjudged 3rd Place
Glenn L. Sentes

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  1. Date: 9/25/2011 1:00:00 AM

    I read this for the second time and still enjoyed it, even without completing understanding it. Please Glenn, tell me what this means lol round 2 of reading it and I like it enough that I want to know!

    Sentes Avatar Glenn Sentes Date: 11/12/2011 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh thanks Kyle Kriticos! I would love to tell you what this all means. Go to chatroom! haha!
  1. Date: 7/20/2011 1:27:00 PM

    Glenn; oranges can be so damn beautiful.The big ones in here taste like pineapples; no kidding! Nice one

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 11:24:00 PM

    any new one glen?? come and visit me, hopefully with a comment; would love to hear from you! :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 1:15:00 AM

    Thank you sooo much for your heartwarming congrats and compliments! God bless us all!

  1. Date: 7/15/2011 1:12:00 AM

    Thank you sooo much for your heartwarming congrats and compliments! God bless us all!

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 7:47:00 PM

    A very clever one for orange! congrats on your great win!

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 6:46:00 PM

    Very intricate, with an impressive vocabulary. It made me smile tonight!

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 1:47:00 PM

    hmmm I wouldn't have got this without some thought! which is just how i like my poetry ;) Congrad's Light & love

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 9:25:00 AM

    congrats on your win in the contest with this sparky little number! I'm almost picking up on a double meaning in this...whatever, it's very well written and has me smiling :-)

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 7:25:00 AM

    My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette, Glenn

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 5:52:00 AM

    Well done Glen....Congrats

  1. Date: 7/14/2011 5:42:00 AM

    Congratulations for your win Glenn in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 9:35:00 PM

    Beautiful, Glenn, Many congrats on your super win. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 8:08:00 PM

    Congrats on your win my friend. A fine write. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 6:41:00 PM

    thankxx Glenn for your most sweet and kindly words of comment.. I am very deeply touched and happy to know have been an inspiration to u luv.. we are led to certain poets for special reasons.. am happy u enjoy my work as I do yours my friend ..blessings with luv..

  1. Date: 7/13/2011 3:34:00 PM

    Congrats Glenn on your terrific third place win with this great write on orange in color my world contest luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 3:27:00 PM

    an interesting poem. thanks for sharing, Jancarl C. Thanks for reading my work

  1. Date: 7/11/2011 12:10:00 PM

    very well written and so creative, good luck in contest.

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 9:52:00 PM

    thank you for joing, glen.. i'll savor this some more come judging time... ang ganga naman! come visit! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 1:20:00 PM

    sounds like a loove afair....I like it!

    Culverhouse Avatar Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/13/2011 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    congrats on the win!!