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Falling in love

I did not realise the depth of love,
Until I fell in.
I began to drown, 
No matter how hard I tried to swim.

I thought my life was over in a painless way,
But I felt more alive the deeper I descended every day.
As it filled me up to my surprise,
My soul seemed bottomless when I was fixated on my lover’s eyes.

Hunger, thirst and cravings made me want more,
From the beautiful goddess I have come to adore.
She too eagerly attempted to satisfied my need,
And she possessed the same ravaging look in this mutual feed.

I am still falling deeply in love,
I have not reached the bottom,
But I know I am hopelessly far from the surface above.

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  1. Date: 8/9/2011 8:38:00 PM

    Now I'm glad to hear your love tuning in to a gentler tone. Always knew you were pulling my leg with the other ones.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:44:00 PM

    Remarkable piece of art Hall, truly beautiful. Hussain

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:44:00 PM

    Remarkable piece of art Hall, truly beautiful. Hussain

  1. Date: 7/31/2011 5:13:00 PM

    Trip in love, you can get back up. Fall in love, you fall forever... :) beautiful poetry dear. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

  1. Date: 7/7/2011 8:19:00 AM

    Great poem......loved it!!!!!!

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 9:22:00 PM

    This has such a magical feel to it Sidney.. I needed to read something positive to start my day with.. Enjoy your day ahead! ;-) Love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 7:10:00 PM

    Nice poem...

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 7:08:00 PM

    May your journey be an endless, bottomless one and stay far away from the surface, me homeboy. Good one, mad person. SOUPMAIL