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Disappointment

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Disappointment

Hiding the regrets  or just being open
Who knows what's the best solution
Expectations arose from the intimacy and long years
Hesitant and tolerance are mere acts of fear
Losing him is not of much importance
Just afraid of taking the blame
And this perhaps is the major disappointment

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  1. Date: 7/11/2011 6:38:00 AM
    Mary J., yes deciding is the bad part before anything... disappointment all ways follows if you allow... enjoyed your poem,, thanks for sharing,...p.d

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    Date: 7/21/2011 9:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thannk you carol,ur amazing
  1. Date: 7/8/2011 5:40:00 AM
    Maybe free verse..Very expressive work...I hope not your life but just a topic about life..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/7/2011 5:56:00 AM
    What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Mary. Love, Carol