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Catie Lindsey

Date: 12/21/2011 5:11:00 PM

so sad. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Merry Christmas! Catie :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/21/2011 4:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Brian's contest Syed. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/16/2011 11:01:00 AM

A sad write it seems to be of a child lost in a war...and his first sight of perhaps a childs heaven? & then you bring us back to his body..I think if I'm right you could use another 4 lines of verse making it clearer?Light & Love {knocking on Heaven Door]

Debbie Guzzi Date: 7/16/2011 1:54:00 PM

perhaps it is that the [he] is not defined?

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/6/2011 12:53:00 PM

Amaan I love this, especially the last stanza.. beautiful write hun ;)

Celene Crescent

Date: 7/5/2011 8:38:00 AM

I wish to go to that place where children sing and daises sway,my soul would definetely miss those i leave behind,sentimental amaan,deep!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 8:14:00 AM

What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us Syed. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2011 1:29:00 AM

Very touching Syed. Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/4/2011 5:54:00 PM

Creative work, enjoyed reading today!

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 7/4/2011 3:20:00 PM

creatively penned Amaan and luv the grand imagery my friend.. now where have u been for so long and are u OK luv? so happy to see your comment on my poetry... missing the good old days luv.. are u still on F.B.? my account is closed there since I got married last year..oh.. keep me posted my friend..hope u have returned to stay luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2011 2:46:00 PM

This one is well composed and very emotive..Descriptive leading me to imagine a place in time..Enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara