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Trepidations

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Trepidations

In my golden sunken eyes

In see the future of my life

Fraught with uncertainty

A name without sanctity

I made a world of desires.

Lost along the line of fires

A dreadful isolated life,

Where I had so long survived

The showdown begins with the start

The ray of hope falling from my heart

I pray for the grave which death promises to take

The life that my destiny gave

The endless voyage ended with despair

Oscillating between hope and despair

Now I sleep in complete silence

A soul free from turbulence…

 

 

MY MATERNAL AUNT DIED IN YR 2003 JUNE OWING TO LIVER CANCER. I LOVED HER 
SO MUCH AND I WILL NOT HESITATE CONFESSING THAT I LOVED HER MORE THAN MY 
MOM....I JUST PHRASED HER WORDS . [PUBLISHED IN 2007 DECEMBER - TIMES OF 
INDIA]
 
 Leighann Anderson's contest ''  Sea of Words''

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  1. Date: 7/1/2011 2:50:00 PM
    A beautiful tribute to your beloved aunt, Smriti

  1. Date: 7/1/2011 2:47:00 PM
    What a wonderful sea of words you have worded in the loving memories of your aunt, smriti,

  1. Date: 7/1/2011 11:25:00 AM
    Grace and beauty sweeps your heart. An honesty in you and a recognition by you of a beautiful person's nature now departed. I had so many Aunt's. But the one that everyone loved as nieces and nephews was the only one that never had children. She had a wonderful endearing nature too. Anyway you sent me back to beautiful thoughts thank you for that and a well written piece. Ian Foley