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Dripping

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Dripping

In my heart an irritation is growing.
Like a drop of water flowing.
Growing more annoying.

*drip*

As my ears strain for the next drop.
My mind begs for it to stop.
Peace of mind it's destroying.

*drip*

In my soul search I have found.
The source of the sound.
Crimson torrent like a flood.

*drip*

Betrayal keeps it open, pain grows.
Like a dripping faucet it flows.
Try as I may, I can't stop the blood.

*drip*

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 7:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Lisa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 9:24:00 AM
    And they have an advertisment for faucets along side of your poem. How clever of them. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Lisa

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 10:44:00 PM
    What a creative view and artistic presentation. Powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!!! Karen

  1. Date: 8/6/2011 11:39:00 PM
    i feel a drip drip. in my soul.. and must i say... ~crimson torrent like flood~ is a wondrous strong line... enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 5:35:00 PM
    The hidden meaning is so evidint and I enjoyed every bit of it.

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 11:26:00 AM
    this was a very creative and enjoyable piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home.

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 8:46:00 AM
    A wonderful poem you have penned and I like the way you placed the drips. God Bless phyl

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 6:24:00 AM
    this was beautiful good luck in the contest. cory

  1. Date: 6/29/2011 2:04:00 AM
    i love your words, its nice o met someone who can give a song to a word love your work, and thenk you for reading mine.

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 6:30:00 PM
    IMAGES ARE VERY POWERFUL AND HAUNTING..WELLDONE..THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY POEM.

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 5:09:00 PM
    An excellent piece giving thought to what's happening all around us. the price of freedom is hard won and if good men don't stand up for what's right and our freedom then bad men will take it away.God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 11:50:00 AM
    good work

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 10:52:00 AM
    This is very dark, and beautiful at the same time. Good write! Thanks for all your comments and support. Ill read some more of your work and let you know what I think... your friend; jay

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 10:28:00 AM
    Another amazing poem Lisa. Have a great day. Love, Carol