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Sunny day

The naked sun
my temperature rising  
gets me sweaty

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  1. Date: 7/10/2011 4:29:00 PM

    Edwin, I think you are very good at forming a haiku. Love personification and metaphors in them, although I know some frown on it. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/1/2011 4:42:00 PM

    Talk about hot days...heh. Excellent Haiku. I can relate to it.^.^ Always, Laura

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 12:23:00 PM

    beautiful expression, Edwin. Here have around 96 in NC

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 8:05:00 AM

    perfect Season for this perfect write Edwin luv.. good luck if for the contest... we are experiencing 100 plus degrees but I am luvin' it so.. hope u are well luv..