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I fell in love with you

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I fell in love with you

I feel as a perfect thief:    
first I stole you a look,    
afterwards a caress, a kiss,    
until arriving to the valuable treasure: 
your heart.  

My lips smile, they express happiness;    
my skin is bristled, expressed shyness;    
my heart accelerates, expressed feelings.   
You have gotten it: I fell in love with you.

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  1. Date: 6/25/2011 3:37:00 PM
    Very lovely!

    LOPEZ Avatar GABRIEL LOPEZ
    Date: 6/27/2011 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! It´s my second poem in english (I´m from Argentina and I´m learning this language).