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Letters to my dad

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Letters to my dad

How about them times! Some of them seem so goofy now, But what fun it was. How we laughed an laughed. What’s missing now Is your face I was your ace. Not a foot print I wouldn’t trace. Always wanted to be in your good grace. Never to act in hast. He would of never made it his place, To judge you; Is a lack of conversational taste. The fact that I adore you is but one of my truths. The way you shaped my views Puts others to waste. They have no clue to what the world holds outside of there face. I can help, But I’m not the man you where Dad. Sometimes I get so sad. And for real even mad. The world took the best person I ever had.

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  1. Date: 7/9/2011 9:53:00 AM

    A very touching write Jay. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

    o'neal Avatar jay o'neal Date: 7/9/2011 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, so much for your support.