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one day

one day you can be anything you want to be
and then you will see

                                            your friends drop out
                                       and then you pout

           what a life you could have
           and then you laughed

                                               first you think of being a singer
                                                   thats a real winnger

      you think of an athlete
that could be badly         

                                                      then a girl walks up and says dont be frusterated
                                                     about a career you will have a great one.

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  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:08:00 AM

    Nice fantasy with equally well worded expressions, brooke

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 5:36:00 AM

    Wow, your good at writing Brooke, didn't ever realize how many things runin your brain, you must get that from me ;-)