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One more glass please

Doesn’t matter, can be white or red
just as long as it goes to my head
Mellow feelings are great
but the headache I hate
So the next morning I stay in bed

Over indulgence could be a clue
when more than one bottle I might do
That’s how winos are made
when your memories fade
And you know where you are but not who



For the contest "Bottle of Wine,( fruit of the vine, when........)"
6/24/11


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  1. Date: 6/27/2011 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Bottle Of Wine" contest Linda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 5:43:00 PM

    OMG..this is so great..the last line is a keeper...congrats. BG

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 7:02:00 AM

    Congrats Linda on a great win with this great entry ..enjoy second place luv..

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 7:14:00 PM

    haha great Limerick and it sounds like experience speaking . That headache is a pounder congrats to you on this humorous limerick, Linda

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 4:59:00 PM

    Congrats....Sara

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 4:51:00 PM

    this is wonderful , Linda. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 3:58:00 PM

    last line is just perfect, great humour, congrats on your second place win in the contest Linda

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 2:28:00 PM

    Oh my another great ending...thank the lord I haven't ever had that happen! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 9:31:00 AM

    Aren't limericks fun to read and write? Congrats on the win. MIke

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 9:05:00 AM

    lol @ "you know where you are but not who". Congratulations on your placement, Linda. Nice one. Now pass me one more glass, please?

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 7:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Linda-cute limerick!

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 9:50:00 AM

    I enjoyed the nice humor in the second limerick, Linda

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 8:18:00 PM

    Linda, this is hilarious and wonderfully done. Good luck in the contest...(hiccup) haha