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Faniciful Falacies

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Faniciful Falacies

With the world spinning deeper
Come to a resting point
On a mossy rock pile
Lounging in a river stream

Sickly coughs cover staggering breaths
Willow shadowed waves break on splintered souls
Reassembled 
For a purpose unknown

The precautious pursuit
First appreciated
When the whirlpool world
Spun deeper

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  1. Date: 6/21/2011 10:52:00 AM
    I love the whirlpool world concept..