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Dangerous ceramic doll

"Dangerous ceramic doll"

Hold on tight
I will hold your hand 
Never let go
Here I stand over the rainbow,
Over that river we know
Under the stars candle light
Can you feel my twilight?
The aurora of my halo will be your guiding light.

I fell in love with the reversibility of our energy
Your dangerous curve came with no street warning
I feel the vibes every time our eyes meet
Say the words I fall at your feet
Kiss me touch until our souls finite.

You stole my heart 
From the start
A dangerous move
I cannot help but walk to your grove
A ceramic doll no one can break
I hold you in every corner of my stare.

You added reason to my life
No more excuses, become my wife
I fell like an angel from heaven into your arms
Like a star, you continue to burn me with your charm
A danger sign lurking an evil genuine grin
State your business; I am your voodoo doll of sin
Like a baby, you hypnotized me with candy

I have no skills like Leonardo Di Vinci 
Your beauty in vein I paint like a mosaic portrait
In my eyes, your ceramic image is worth a fortune.

My dangerous ceramic doll
I will be there when you call
Behind the beauty of your ceramic walls
I am lock like Einstein in his own mind
A cell a jail, don't let me out 
You are that women I dream about
Lost inside the beauty of-
You are my "dangerous ceramic doll" of love.


poetry assignment# 4 destroyer's (contest)
Title: "Dangerous ceramic doll"
Form: (30 lines+) free verse
Category: love, devotion, nature, and art

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 7:43:00 AM

    I hope you will try more challenges like the many contests here at Soup, because this was a pretty good poem that a challenge was able to inspired from you! I don't recall this particular theme ever given at Soup. I enjoyed this and hope to see you writing MORE. Luv, Andrea and happy thanksgiving.

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 6:34:00 AM

    I love it! "I have no skills like Leonardo Di Vinci Your beauty in vein I paint like a mosaic portrait In my eyes, your ceramic image is worth a fortune." thats my favorite verse..

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 11:21:00 PM

    subtle but darkly beautiful, dominix.. winning wishes toy you... what a hard assignment which you did well... :) huggs,nette