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Below is the poem entitled Is It All Your which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Is It All Your

Does it feel in your mind, that I would’nt thinks about you.
Wanna wake me every night, that’s only is your dream.
My world goes around the dark, not the lights of streets alone.
Lacking your face in my eyes, not even the smile….Is there………….

Is it all your magic
That made me maniac…..
Is it all your eyes
That takes me to the heaven…..

Wanna wake mine, from all the dreams at night
Wanna make nit fine, giving your hand to me		

Looking your eyes… Looking your eyes…..
 My heart goes next to you.
But, still searching your eyes, In your eyes…..
Is I’ am there or not for you.
Just hold my hand…. hold my hand…..
I will take you to bandstand.
And, in front of the sea….,will take the promise to give you heaven on this earth…..

Is it your entire saga?
That made me so sacred….
Is it all your love?
That made me so hunger in the world….
Wanna wake mine, from all the dreams at night
Wanna make nit fine, giving your hand to me…..ho….ho! Ho….

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  1. Date: 9/6/2011 11:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poet being featured this week Amit. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 5:01:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amit. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 8:17:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup..so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 7/10/2011 12:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thankx, plz read my next one that is dreams in my eyes
  1. Date: 6/18/2011 7:04:00 PM
    Very creative and thoughtful expressions, Amit

    Valmiki Avatar Amit Valmiki
    Date: 7/10/2011 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks sir, also read my inspirational flick dreams in my eyes.