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Letters From The Ocean

For as the sun drowns in the misty waves
I coat my dreams with the filthy shade
And gently some drops of ocean tickled 
Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune
I coat my dreams with the filthy shade
Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope
Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune
Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep
Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope
To believe in a rise of a holy sun
Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep
That abides to arise with daily new notes
To believe in a rise of a holy sun
And gently some drops of ocean tickled 
That abides to arise with daily new notes
For as the sun drowns in the misty waves



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  1. Date: 7/12/2011 11:40:00 AM

    This is such a lovely poem filled with creative imagery, Samar. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:19:00 AM

    Congrats Samar on your wonderful win with this dazzling assignment ..luv..

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations Samar on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 4:18:00 AM

    My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Samar

  1. Date: 7/12/2011 12:41:00 AM

    Samar,,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 8:50:00 PM

    I sure enjoy pantoum poetry, Samar.This was very nice to read.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 5:50:00 PM

    Very deep and meaningful expressions, samar,