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Twisted Love

As I stand and look at you
I see the ropes around your neck
Can't you see what you do for me
How it makes me come alive inside

It  leads  me places I cannot hide
I see the fear within your eyes
I see your emotions laid bare for me

As I watch the way you react to me 
You take me places I long to be 
This is the way I was taught to be

And I can not go all by myself  So 
I hope you forgive me for the things 
I'm about to do to you and with you 
I see it in your face you long for  it 

For the things I long to do to you
I know that you understand inside
 For what we are about to do 
 I know that you forgive me too

These feelings just come over me
I need the presents of a warm body
To take me where I wanna  be 
  
I just can't help myself you see
Something just takes over me
When I'm done with you 
I promise to set you free
I'm not playing tricks on you

I'll lay you to rest with the others
It really touches me to see you cry
I know it's because you care for me
And it truly makes me come alive

It's only a matter of time you know
This just might be your last day alive
So maybe you might try to be happy

This is the only way I feel a live
I'm bleeding for you truly I am 
Can't you see how I feel inside 

Tell me you love me before you die
Can't you see this  is the only way
It's the only way I feel alive inside!

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:56:00 AM

    Goosebumps...I got goosebumps!! Too many memeories brought to the front of my brain w/ this 1, and that's what makes it move for me...my 1st fav =D -Lauryn

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:33:00 AM

    a need to feed spider like, upon a serving mate, the price of death the deadly bite, some food upon your plate, the cost of sweet delight...

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 6:44:00 PM

    * "I LOVE THIS SWEET, SWEET TWIST UPON DESIRES FIRES * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL DEBBIE * TAKE ME & HAVE ME AS YOUR LOVELY DOES PLEASE * I PROMISE I SHALL ENJOY IT TOO * EVERYTHING YOU DO * I PROMISE I WON'T CRY BUT * I'M SURE THAT I WILL SIGH *.* LOVE IT LOVE LOVE IT * THANK YOU * A JOY TO FIND YOUR BEAUTIES SPLENDOURS * INSIDE MY COM BOX * HAPPY HOLIDAYS SWEET LADY * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 11:04:00 AM

    Beautifully written, Deb. Indeed, our days are numbered, but feeling love makes us feel alive. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 12:26:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Debbie. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol