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Hues to Blues

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Hues to Blues

     Its perfect here.
     I love it.
     Here...Peace and serenity fill and warm my heart.
     Out here...Its like Im someone else.
     Its so calm.
     Its a place where I can finally find myself.
         That was before.
         This is after.
     Here it was green and every hue you could imagine.
     Now...Its black and ash.
     You knew I loved it so you took it.
     You took it from me.
     I've lost it.
     I've lost myself.
     You took this cluster of nature from me.
     And with it you took a peice of me.
     With or without you,
     I'm stronger.
     Although its nothing,
     but black ash and smoke,
     I still love it here.
     I will come here
     and loose myself as I did before,
     Even though it is after.
     

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  1. Date: 3/17/2012 6:08:00 PM
    You've chosen to call this Light Poetry, but I find it deeply moving. Congratulations. - Chuck

    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 4/3/2012 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks So much! I am looking forward to reading your petry as well. :D
  1. Date: 3/13/2012 6:28:00 AM
    <======thinks this lovely... Patrick

    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 4/3/2012 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much i appreciate that you have read my poetry and am looking forward toreading yours. ;P
  1. Date: 3/12/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cheyenne. Love, Carol

    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 4/3/2012 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much am looking forward to beading more of your poerty Carol...Thanks again ;D
  1. Date: 6/20/2011 2:40:00 PM
    this is an amazing poem i thought i would come and check out the poems you written i knew you were good but i didn't know you were this good

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 2:37:00 AM
    wow this is amazing just truly amazing all your poems are chyernne

    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 2/18/2012 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! IT means alot having other people read my poetry and like them. Thanks alot!
    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 6/20/2011 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much!Im amazed that people such as yourself is commenting on my poems...I never expected it at all...I am only a young...very young poet. Not a professional yet but some day I hope to be. All these sincere comments make me feel better about myself.Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Very creative, deeply meaningful write, Cheyenne

    Kay Avatar Cheyenne Kay
    Date: 6/20/2011 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! SOmeday I hope to have a book of my own and I think within a few years I will have a poetry books and you and all of the others who have commented on my work will be in the thanks! Because you guys are so nice and I negver expected this website to be so thoughtful and sincere!Thank you so very much!