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1971-2011

                          1971 to 2011
Then,
If only, we could understand
We could have walked hand in hand.
If only, plots could be reversed
Echoes could have been hushed.
If only, coups could be avoided
Laws could have been abided.
If only, lust could be elapsed
Our land could have been wrapped.
If only, ego could be aside
‘Sorry’ could have been pride.
If only, “The Book” could be cited
Some respect could have been provided.
If only, we could understand
We could have walked hand in hand. 
Now,
We may walk hand in hand
If only, we can understand.
Situations should not be revised
If only, leaders can be advised.
Other’s drones should be erased
If only, dear ones can be praised.
Respect and education is their right
If only, we can feel their plight.
Mistakes are meant to teach
If only, past may we reach.
As a nation may we reside
If only, keep “The Book” beside
Then, we may walk hand in hand
If only we can understand.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2011 8:49:00 AM

    very well spoken , top makrs

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 11:42:00 PM

    Thank u all... its quite encouraging to have luvly comments.

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 1:31:00 PM

    Very creative and interesting expressions on brotherhood,

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 5:42:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Huma. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 5:12:00 AM

    hopefully some day we will *luv skat

    asghar Avatar Huma asghar Date: 6/16/2011 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    exactly...hopes are meant to keep us going
    asghar Avatar Huma asghar Date: 6/16/2011 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    exactly...hopes are meant to keep us going