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The Angel Cries At Night

'The Angel Cries At Night''


I  heard an angel speak last night and he said ''write''
and bring enlightenment to  this dark place,
the hollowness that prevails
breaks my silence
I writhe in agony
to see the despicable dead 
restless and infuriated
daunted by their  formidable grave
they long for salvation...
My stagnated beauty is futile...
Alas ! I cannot restore their lives..
the dead leaves pay their homage
where the ALIVE one fails to visit...


Smriti Jha 
For the contest ' angels at the cemeteries ' 
14.06.2011 

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  1. Date: 12/26/2011 3:08:00 PM

    What an amazing write... you have an unique way of writing with such soul and belief... outstanding.... always Michael

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 6:07:00 PM

    you're doing as the angel asks and illuminating with your writing.

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 4:49:00 AM

    Profound words ,This should be a ten for sure !!!Good to Read you again Smriti. Anne

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 3:44:00 PM

    I think I just found a gem. Thank you for your kind comments. Love and Light Vienna

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 12:56:00 PM

    Wonderful write Smriti..congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 5:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Angels" contest Smriti. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 6:31:00 PM

    My congratulations on this fine win in the contest of carolyn, smriti

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 6:58:00 PM

    Congrats Smriti on your fantastic win in the contest with this stunning entry luv..enjoy sweet success for excellence in poetry..

  1. Date: 6/19/2011 6:41:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in my contest.

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 10:24:00 AM

    i like this write and thanks for the comment on mine

  1. Date: 6/14/2011 9:31:00 PM

    I would love to hear the symbolic meaning to this.....It was less direct and mysterious in nature. May your beauty grow forever....producing more precious life.

    Fiery Avatar Red Fiery Date: 6/15/2011 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Now you know that....
  1. Date: 6/14/2011 2:34:00 AM

    you still have time to enter, closing date is not until 13th JULY, good poem by the way, says a lot in relatively few words...

    Fiery Avatar Red Fiery Date: 6/15/2011 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charlotte