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In Her Tears

I find myself, helpless, as i look out of the window of my soul,

at a beautiful face, flooded by emotional tears.

Her feelings of love, are so dear to me now,

for yet it seems, in those very tears, i find myself.

Even my heart, and the greatest love from inside me,

is only a small piece that is falling from her cheek.

For everything i can do, for all that i am, even my tenderness,

is all but a very small sacrifice, that i see in her tears.


Her tears are my passion,

for In her tears i yearn,

Her tears are my desire,

for in those tears are my love.


And i see in her tears, the promise of life,

i was never alone, for her love remained.

For her tears are a reflection of my soul,

for in those tears, i see us, and i see love.

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  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:02:00 PM

    They must be tears of happiness! I can't imagine anyone needing to feel sad with you. Your gentl soul shines through all your poems and especially this lovely romantic one. :)

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 1:48:00 PM

    Hey John, Has she read this? What a heart felt write!! Her tears prove so many things...Love the reflection of the soul and how u can see both of you in them...and then your love....u are a big romantic ham!! ha ha. Women's tear glands are larger than mans...there is sooo much science in a tear drop...Happy New Year's, friend! And to your wife and family! Love ya, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 2:51:00 PM

    You not only brought life to these words but also to a tear... that you made us all feel.. Mark of a true Poet.....Michael

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 9:37:00 PM

    I hope they are tears of happiness and that's how it seems to me reading this. This is very sweet. Sounds like a great love!!

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 2:20:00 PM

    Amazing! keep it up.

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 8:09:00 PM

    The love that will soon be The amazing piece That is now apart of me.. Amazing write. I loved it Keep writing :)

  1. Date: 7/6/2011 12:10:00 AM

    Wonderful job my friend. This is truly a remarkable piece on love.

  1. Date: 6/13/2011 3:50:00 PM

    this is so beautiful nice job with it.. cory

  1. Date: 6/11/2011 6:23:00 PM

    John this is truly a romantic emotionally charged write with vivid vibrant imagery ..the tears are so lifelike... and the dynamics of the presentation are simply beautiful my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 6/10/2011 4:52:00 PM

    John the more I read of your work the more I admire you as a man . This poem show the heart and soul of a great person. It also shows that love is great and sometimes it hurts. Superb writing . Your friend Anne

    green Avatar john aaron green Date: 6/11/2011 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you anne, love is my heart and soul...
  1. Date: 6/9/2011 9:27:00 PM

    Smile ~ “Great Poem My Dear Friend ~ Expressed Extremely Well ~ Always Is When One Can Somewhat Feel Its Verse ~ Whether Knowing or Not The Exact Subject of Its Heartfulness ~ `Kudos` ~ Thanks for Your Kind Com; Much Appreciated ~ `Keep Painting ~ Love,`“ John!:) ~

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 9:37:00 PM

    i saw in those tears a reflection of my very being, and i know there is love.....

  1. Date: 6/5/2011 6:19:00 PM

    John, Always a great read. I am so amazed how one can share love in a strong way.. Enjoyed,..p.d.